Tell Me Tuesday: FINALLY.

I have finally vanquished the various issues that have been preventing me from posting this since the 29th of October. *Deep breath* Okay! So, Reesa posted the following picture on Tuesday, October 25th, with a request for more information than the photographer provided. Art, music, writing, anything. It took a couple of days, but this is what came to mind… It’s based on my odd Brittany thing, and I’ve taken decided liberties with the northwestern coast of France. It’s also currently untitled.

Carousel closed for winter on deserted pier, over a river that has iced over.


"It changes every year."

"It’s not so bad. I like the colors."

"The colors are nice, I suppose. Sometimes I just miss… simplicity. Waves and wind and water, with nothing else."

"There were plenty of other things. Shells and crabs and mussels, clams and seaweed and little fish."

"Yes, yes, I was counting them, too."

"And there was you."

"And the birds. The birds found me first."

"So they did, but I think you count more than they did."

"I like to think so."

"How long has it been, since then?"

"Years and years."

"Fifty, sixty, eighty… One hundred and ten…"

"Over two hundred."

"Over two hundred. The tide comes in, the tide goes out, lambing-time comes, and lambing-time goes. At least there are still farms where we left them."

"More has changed than the land. Look."

Two figures walked down the pier, toward the shuttered ride. Brice adjusted his scarf, then pulled his hat further down over his ears.

"It’s the fiber, isn’t it? I knew it would be itchy. I’m—"

"No, ‘Caël, it’s the wind," Brice said, hunching his shoulders up as another gust came off the water. "Your homespun is just fine."

Judicaël frowned at the sea-green and coast-blue wool that obscured all but Bryce’s eyes. "Are you—"

"Saints preserve me," Brice muttered, shaking his head. He grabbed the sleeve of Judicaël’s coat in one storm-grey mitten and hauled him around the gayly painted carousel. "You’re such a worrywart. I love everything you’ve ever made for me, ‘Caël. Especially—" He cut the slightly-muffled words off, wind-pink skin deepening to red as he blushed. Mitten tucked under his other arm, he tugged his scarf down, then reached over and pulled Judicaël’s own scarf out of the way.

"Brice," he said, his eyes closing as the other young man leaned in close. "I just…"

"I know." With that, he kissed Judicaël, his bare hand tucked under the lapel of his friend’s coat.

"See? Look at them! And out where anyone could see them."

"You kissed me out here. There were just as many people, too."

"There weren’t as many people living here, then. And besides, they’re not alone."

"Oh, I see."

"Briiiiice! Caaaaaaël!"

"It’s the wonder twins," Brice said, drawing back from the other young man just enough to get his mitten back on.

"There you are," said a girl in a bright pink ski jacket with a matching hat.

"Snogging again, no doubt," another young man in a puffy black jacket said. A bright orange-and-yellow striped hat with ear flaps and a pom-pom sat on his head.

"Probably," she said, and giggled as the two in question blushed and adjusted their scarves. "It’s not like it’s a secret or anything."

"Things certainly have changed."

"As they should."

"It… It’s…"

"Maybe it’s not a secret," Judicaël said, crossing his arms as well as he could. "That doesn’t mean that we want to show off."

"Just because you think it’s cute doesn’t mean other people wanna watch it," Earflap Hat said, curling his lip at Pinky, but his tone made it a joke.

"I wouldn’t mind showing off, just a little," Brice said, putting an arm around Judicaël before leaning over to plant a loud smack on his cheek. The effect was somewhat spoiled by two layers of fabric between them.  "’Caël’s too pretty to keep hidden."

"If you say so," Earflap Hat said, rolling his eyes and jerking his head toward the street. "Come on, it’s freezing. I’ll buy coffees if it means we can go inside."

"Valère is buying coffee! I think I can be persuaded to leave this compelling discussion for later," Pinky said, bouncing on her toes.

"As long as we can quit talking about whether I’m going to be put on public display," Judicaël said, with a put-upon sigh. "Please."

"Of course," Valère said, waving his hands, "there’s football to talk about. Much more interesting than your silly snogging." Holding his arms up, he turned away and started back up the pier. "Rumor has it that Filip Djordjević might be getting traded to Rennes! Can you imagine?"

"Oh, I’m sure that’s a very big deal," Pinky said, to his back. To Judicaël and Brice, she said, "I suppose you two would like me to get a head start?"

"Maybe just a small one," Brice said, his eyes crinkling at the corners.

"Catch up soon," she said, grinning at them. "I can only listen to Val’s wittering for so long!"

 "We will," Judicaël said, waving at her. "See you, Jacinthe."

Jacinthe waved back and skipped away.

"I know you didn’t bring me out here to look at the view," Judicaël said, when she was halfway to catching up with Val.

"No," Brice said, taking a deep breath. He took his mitten off again, pulling his scarf down and pushing his hat up a little. "No, I wanted… Um. ‘Caël? Next term… Next term, there’ll be an empty room, and and and if you, maybe you’d want to…"

"Maybe I’d want to?" Judicaël squinted at Brice for a moment before his eyes went wide. "Are you asking—"

"Yes," Brice said, into the soft silence that followed. "If you’d like to, there’ll be room, so you can have your own space…"

Judicaël was utterly still for a heartbeat, two; he put his hands on either side of Brice’s face and held him in place for a long kiss.

"Did they just agree to live together?"

"I think so."

"And their friends know…"

"Well, probably not yet."

"No, I meant that they’re in love."

"Ah. Sorry."

"That’s all right. It would have been nice, you know."

"What are you talking about? We lived together."

"But not like they will."


"It was… difficult. But I would do it all over again."

"I love you, too."

"Did you say something?" Brice looked around, turning as he thought he saw someone out of the corner of his eye. There was nothing remarkable, though, just the sea and the shore and the pier.

"Not out loud," Judicaël said, taking Brice’s hand and a step in the direction their friends had gone. "I don’t know if I still have all my toes."

"Like I said, you’re a worrywart," Brice said, following him with a smile. "I’ll warm them for you, later."

"Which is only fair, since you brought me out here in the first place."

A set of cold fingers laced through another, and if the light was right, half-formed shapes suggested a pair of young men dressed in the typical clothes of late 18th century farmers. They drifted after Brice and Judicaël, stopping at the end of the jetty to watch them round the corner before fading away, leaving behind a faint sense of satisfied peace.